Thread:Mechemik/@comment-31345126-20170514110457

I just wondered if there was a better way of fracing this sentence?

"Skellige's Most Wanted is first of small and short graphic strips realised by ..."

It doesn't roll of the tounge and putting in "the" might be better.

"Skellige's Most Wanted is the first of the small and short graphic strips realised by ..."

And  i think  during [date] should be replaced with on [date].

"It was published during 9 April 2016"   >    "It was published on 9 April 2016"

The same goes for the second, third and fourth installment.

I just wondered if you agreed, since english is not my native language and you're an admin. 