Talk:Northern Wars/@comment-5.150.213.104-20150918224822/@comment-124.170.27.12-20170128112914

 I wish someone had taken in your advice.

 Over a year later and this page is still very difficult to read fluidly. The English is peculiar and the author(s) overuse of unnecessary commas had me re-reading several paragraphs multiple times just to reestablish context of what the article was referencing.



 Christ, halfway through the article the Center Army Group swaps to being referred to as middle group army. I share OP's sentiments; kudos to whoever wrote the article. It's just disappointing that I found it incomprehensible.

 Lastly, in reference to L.K.Nguyen's comment, OP is likely here for the same reason that I am; to learn about the Northern Wars. Meaning we're ill-equipped to edit the article without knowledge of the subject.