Thread:Mechemik/@comment-44925288-20200205110219/@comment-27075564-20200208160241

I've already told you why, you just didn't like what I had to say, but if you're looking for particulars, using shorter phrases is a lot more helpful with pages than wordy ones. You asked for an example, so here it is: "In this they may be compared to" when "A major difference" worked just fine. All it required was a few words changed around, yet you seemed insistent on changing it to something that didn't flow well with the paragraph as a whole.

You also keep complaining about "grammatically correct" however with English, colloquial form works fine here (as long as it's not obvious spelling errors, text, using "I" pronouns, etc.)