Thread:Juraj103/@comment-31463564-20170609202548/@comment-24448826-20170625150257

Well done. I saw Aamad's crew article and, if you don't mind, wrote you some remarks: Otherwise, as always good job! I would make those fixes myself but, as I said to Mechemik, I grew to hate taking credit for other's work.
 * 1. Ofieri should be with big A.
 * 2. best warriors of the city? Not of the country or somesuch?
 * 3. at least one of those images should be main, next to a text
 * 4. Do you plan to name that article Sewers in Oxenfurt or Sewers of Oxenfurt? Because you write it differently on different pages and, the latter version would fit better with previous sewers (of Vizima, of Loc Muinne)