Talk:Serrit

This article has too many personal turns of phrases that may or may not relate to actual in-game descriptions. Lines such as:

"They were questioned separately but it was uneventful, no violence."

and

"After the emperor made Letho an offer he couldn't refuse..."

should be reworded. For example, the former could say: "They were questioned separately without incident." and the later: "After the emperor made Letho an offer to assassinate the Northern Kings, he..."

I'll rework the article later unless someone has an objections. --Gulfwulf (talk) 04:03, August 12, 2016 (UTC)