Thread:Mechemik/@comment-37377389-20181104052601/@comment-27075564-20181104061008

Hi,

Sure, I can do that. I'm ok with your editing the walkthrough parts (I agree, they're rather verbose where it shouldn't be) however the main concern was a few things:


 * Coleman doesn't necessarily die as long as you don't give the Scoiateal the supplies in the previous chapter. As such, he creates a conditional section where he may or may not be helpful. However, if you didn't give the supplies and he still dies, it's worth noting the game edition on it as originally it was this way (like how we mark when a later patch changed an outcome).


 * please refrain from using bulleted points to mark a note about a journal entry outcome. Our standard is typically just to indent it or italicize it out (or just both).


 * also please don't break the format for where quest lines can go 2 different directions. For example, you'll see in the very first quest for Kaer Morhen it's split based on one's choice as there's no way to go back and do the other part. However, like above, if you find this has changed please make note of it and indicate the patch when possible, thanks!